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The Heart Still Cares --Discussion--

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Re: The Heart Still Cares --Discussion--

Post by PotSmuggle on Fri Feb 06, 2015 1:12 am

I love what you did with the argument in this chapter, you kept it simple and the characters felt bad about it at the end so it felt very in-character. Good job, keep up the great work!



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The Heart Still Cares --Discussion--

Post by pokesrini on Fri Feb 06, 2015 8:43 am

Thanks! I actually wrote that chapter straight here, so what you see is the first draft. I plan to improve it here and there once the criticism comes in. xD


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